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luedon's Biography:
Gender: Couple
Age: Over 60
Weight: Average
Height: Average
Location: Australia
Orientation: Straight
Interested In: Nothing
Status: Attached
Smoke: No
Drink: Yes
Fetishes: Memories of glories past
Pets: Other
User Number: 2427783
Member Since: February 20, 2015
Last Modified: February 25, 2017
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She writes. He edits and makes suggestions, which are occasionally accepted.

L & D

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We discovered Literotica some years ago and shortly after found 'Eyes Wide Open' by SusanB, published in 2012 in the Erotic Couplings category. It tells the story of a young woman whose husband made a remark about swinging. A male friend takes advantage of her husband's remark to seduce her.

The story describes in great detail the tension she feels over the three hour period of her seduction. I considered it to be the most erotic story I had ever read and I wondered whether I could write something equally erotic.

I couldn't. My stories have a theme of insecurities a woman may sometimes feel when things happen within her life and marriage. My stories don't have the tension of 'Eyes Wide Open'.

So my stories are very different from the story that led me to start writing. But they are also different from most stories submitted in the Loving Wives category, which seem to me to be about men's reactions to their wives' adultery with little exploration of how she came to stray from the path of righteous marital fidelity.

I'm not asking my reader to like or agree with what my characters are doing. (And from the comments made by readers, it is clear that most don't.) But I do hope that I have written the stories well enough for the more thoughtful readers to understand something of my characters' motivation.

L

Update Note September 2016

When I submitted my first story I tried to write something erotic, as I thought this was what the Literotica site was all about. I hadn't paid a lot of attention to the comments made by readers about stories before my own story attracted some really interesting ones.

Because my story was about a wife's extra-marital affair, it was submitted in the Loving Wives category. Over the time since, I have become fascinated by many of the comments made about LW stories.

These comments have a totally different tone to comments made about stories in the other categories.

What I find interesting is their strong moralising tone, being highly critical of any wife who has sex outside her marriage.

There are readers who seem to read LW stories not for their eroticism, but so that they can express their moral outrage.

Most LW stories make little attempt to explain the reasons why a wife may wander or how a situation may have come about that leads to a wife committing adultery. Likewise there is little attempt made in the commentaries to understand the wandering wife's motivation.

Sometimes the situation may be a here-and-now occurrence, as in the 'Eyes Wide Open' story I mentioned earlier. But mostly it is likely to be something that builds up over a long time leading to a wife being more open to the possibility of having a relationship with a man who is not her husband.

My own first story 'Lue to Lucy and back' also did little to explain the background, although I believe it did more than most LW stories. But, as I said before, it was written with eroticism in mind not with the reasoning behind the wife's behaviour.

So I have written Lue's story again, but this time through the voice of her husband Don, giving the years of background to the situations that were more briefly described in 'Lue to Lucy' and 'One Wounded Seagull'.

It is submitted as a Non-erotic story rather than Loving Wives, because I am hoping that those reading it will take a more thoughtful approach than is usually reflected in LW comments, and because there is no explicit sex in the story.

We shall see.

L

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