I've found an editor! Thanks to the awesome NaokoSmith I hope you'll find the quality of Chapter 2 of 'The Pirate and the Elf' somewhat better if it's literacy that rocks your boat.

Considering revising and resubmitting Chapter 1. Should I carry on into Chapter 3? Hmm...

My tastes are broad, very broad, and I'm about as open minded as possible so I'll read most things that are put in front of me.

Feel free to let me know what you think, either in comments or DM or via the forum.

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