Just a Jab #16 has been submitted 18Jan

I have plenty more in store for our hard up hero, but would like feedback on whether to continue. I am also considering going back to the start and re-writing the early parts. I would appreciate any constructive comments.

I will be working on a new story in a different category in the meantime. This other story has been echoing around in my head for some time and needs to come out.

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