I'm still a beginning author in both erotica and non-erotic work. I'm working on increasing my plot lines for my erotic work as well as increasing the length of the sex-scenes themselves. My changing level of experience makes my work and myself constant WIP. Be gentle but truthful. If there's something that I could use work on, then I appreciate knowing what it is, that'll make my work that much better the next time around. I'm a big fan of reworking pieces if I feel that they need it, so if you come back and something has changed or been lengthened and you liked the earlier version better, feel free to let me know. A friend of mine once told me that a great book was ruined by excessive revision, so I don't want to overdo it. Thanks for stopping by. :) ----K | 
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