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jack7's Biography:
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Member Since: June 25, 2007
Last Modified: July 12, 2015
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I hope you enjoy reading about the lives of Louis and Jill. The best way to enjoy their story is from the beginning, Ch.1, and with an open mind. I hope to continue this series and/or write something else. Hoping I come up with an idea feels right. Right now life issues are getting in the way of writing. Which sucks.

I worked very hard on Ch.4 and the previous chapters. I'm a high school grad. I don't read much beyond the news. I have no training in how to write. I tried to be as thorough as possible in my review for grammar, spelling and punctuation etc. If I miss something, and I'm likely to, I regret it and apologize. I tried.

Also, I'm not computer savvy. I regret that all attempts to try submitting this as a proper document have failed. I had to cut and paste. As a result, certain words intended to be italicized for affect, are not. A huge disappointment. Please allow your open mind to assist in how you interpret my character's dialogue.

Some things I want to address after reading comments, in a way that might help you better enjoy/understand my story:

* Please keep in mind this is fantasy. It's not my idea of realism down to the detail as you or I would believe or behave. Some aspects of the story you just have to look past or get over, like worrying about some 18 yr old kid blabbing, STD's, etc. I get all that, but cut me some slack. This is fantasy. Kinda have to take some liberties.

* The slow build up is there for a reason. Think of it as mental foreplay. With the Loving Wives theme, I feel it's much more exciting if you care about the characters and can relate to them and are invested in them emotionally. That's why I put in all the extraneous stuff and have the slooooow build up. Otherwise it's not much of a story, it's more of an idea.

* To those who feel there's too much dialogue, I respectfully refer you to the title of the story. It (the dialogue) is not going anywhere.

* Lastly, the reason for the lack of positions and oral sex is because it's not in line with the fantasy as laid out by Louis to Jill in Ch.1.

Thanks to my editor who also worked hard on this (as well as Ch3). If there's credit to be had, he deserves some.

And many thanks to all who take the time to read my story and to those who post and especially to those who send comments. It means a lot and I really appreciate it!

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