Always looking for feedback, of any kind. Please feel free to email me, @Yshomatsu on Twitter for the rare update =P

3/30/15

To the Anonymous person that sent me real feedback,

THANK YOU! I'm giving Inqui. ch 4 one last edit before posting it. My request for some help on the forums didn't provide any fruit, but I'll keep trying.

I don't want to delay Ch 4 but I'm very interested in hearing if I learned from your advise and would like to get more feedback from you. Tear my story to shreds, it's the only way I'll truly improve.

I'll spend more time going over Ch 5 before and after sending it to my editor.

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