Spree 3

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Part 4 of the 10 part series

Updated 10/07/2022
Created 12/18/2003
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Icingsugar
Icingsugar
29 Followers

drunk as a skunk
on dew and berries
on you and Merry
Christmas carols
choruses carry
me home again

jagged jumbled
illucid I lay
blowing bubbles
of champagne
and of chardonnay
and of me and you
our spit combined
tongues entwined

a silly sparkle
spunky salute,
sung in a major minor
mish-mash key
crashing from tongue
and your blood red lips
glued to my skin
into the marrow of me

wit and charm shut down
eloquence fled
elegance dead
no need for those
in elusive intoxication
of hair and rush and care
push, pull, plea, breath
shapes and textures
heat and beat and
definitive defeat

we resonate, so resolute
incoherent, incredibly
incomprehensible
in complete harmony
incoming, incoming
coming closer, colliding
coexisting, sliding
slippery on top of me
scripting a trail
of strawberry flavoured
saliva over still, somehow,
summer tanned skin

so compact
such contact
a cool-off caress
blowing bubbles
of champagne
a beautiful mess
giggling gushes
of afterglow giddy
afternoon excess

Icingsugar
Icingsugar
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echoes_sechoes_sabout 20 years ago
Mmmmmm

Can I have Christmas back? Loved this.

Maria2394Maria2394over 20 years ago
the word play

is excellent, and the rhythm even better..I like your *spree* writing Icingsugar, keep it up ;) maria

*Catbabe**Catbabe*over 20 years ago
I loved the pace

of this piece and of course, the language. If I had to pick a favourite part it would be,

"...sliding

slippery on top of me

scripting a trail

of strawberry flavoured

saliva over still, somehow,

summer tanned skin..."

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Rybka once said....

....(paraphrasing) "The best poems are the ones I wish I'd written" I wish.

'Nuff said.

RybkaRybkaover 20 years ago
Spree 3

Marvelous word play. Well done!

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