pip gets lost

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2rivers
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what started as fun
is now not so

it’s funny
how things expand by powers
only mathematicians
and baseball fans understand

packages drift on trucks
like love flies
between dry clouds and humidity

the host here leans forward
feels not a one, single
~pause~
~pause again~
hug or affection

_________________

pip gets found

strong lyrics flavor this boy’s soup
he stands in rain and shadow
others notice and tug
his eye lids

there are veins below
maps of his drug
a puppy, a kitty
exit signs usher his will

new and better pip
rubber and vinyl
cool streets
dead end

good bye
pip pip

2rivers
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jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Very nice...

I liked the off beat phrasing here, it fit the feeling perfectly. I also enjoyed the "stage directions" (the pause and pause again)... reminded me of Vachel Lindsay. Excellent poems.

jim :)

AngelineAngelineabout 20 years ago
The great expectations

are generally the unmet ones, but love is real and sometimes

the good things that happen in the tiniest increments are best. Wot larks, Pip. :)

Maria2394Maria2394about 20 years ago
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this just feels so sad...I think I know pip from another life

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