Neatly & Completely

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You caught me by surprise,
befuddlement and such.
Said you no longer cared,
but hey! Let's stay in touch.

How simple I appear,
a shadow of a man.
I'll dance in solitaire,
you'll call me when you can.

There is no lets do lunch,
we'll cut the cord neatly.
Don't come round here no more.
Let me heal completely.


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quietpolyquietpolyalmost 20 years ago
nicely done

Poetry as the punching bag. Nicely done.

misskittyclittymisskittyclittyabout 20 years ago
I agree

So simply and beautifully said...nothing left to say...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Concise

and only slightly less than perfect. The familiar dance between man and woman......would that relationships were less complicated. Well done.

IcingsugarIcingsugarabout 20 years ago
Neat simplicity

Poetry doesn't always have to be elaborate and complicated. This verse said, with simplicity, wit and charm, everything it needed to ay.

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