bare flame

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Part 1 of the 2 part series

Updated 06/13/2021
Created 01/29/2004
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2rivers
2rivers
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what is the recipe
unprotected makeup of
this ghost tissue,
untouchable matter

self contained halo
heat for the moment
suns are mothers
incestuous eons away

joining across
crowded infinite;
recollection burns,
boils, scorches

enlightens our load

2rivers
2rivers
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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
FLAMES ARE HOT AND FEISTY

except when uncontrolled. TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
understanding

Mothers enlighten our path to understanding.

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 20 years ago
2Rivers

my words always look like chicken scratch every time I read one of your poems. It is hard to comment. The first four lines are magic. The rest is the pedastal upon which magic stands.

Maria2394Maria2394about 20 years ago
this is

just an excellent poem, insightful

my favorite lines---

suns are mothers

incestuous eons away

yeah, thats good :)

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