Claims : algae lines, or not

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Updated 03/14/2021
Created 02/17/2004
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Long stringed algae          
wafting in currents .
      who drew them, who suckles them        
Maybe He rode over Ones in line
      was there a line?
who knows? who cared ,
certainly not He

      Strode in  Captured,
Took,  Claimed
      Devoured  nurtured        
Make her His,
Woman  girl

      His,  None else's.        

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KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 17 years ago
Backward and down the evolutionary line…

Usually, LeBroz, I like to follow your selections from the archive. This one was an exception. “Claiming” women and girls? ‘Making’ them ‘his’? Could not tell which one turned me off more the ancestral mammal “claims” or the floras metaphors

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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But the real question is, how many women will he make his?

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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But the real question is, how many women will he make his?

RybkaRybkaabout 20 years ago
Claims, Clams & Cum?

Razz, I am not sure what you are doing here. Are you equating algae strings to threads of cum? There is a story here that I have missed. :(

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