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-hair is pulled straight back-
don’t expect anything
from a block of
clumsy
ordered text

the string:
hair straight back
slick as the night we met
first time palms
kiss of a warrior
whose lips bleed
same as pedestrian
victims
like me, a lover
black and white and grainy
we’re delicate, we break

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Was enjoying the play of the words;

Didn't recognize the voice at first

Till it hit me ~

It's another smithpeter personna

!

Maria2394Maria2394about 20 years ago
I really wish

that I could listen to the audio of these poems, but the words do stand alone, solid yet fragile, a tender kiss without lips :)

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Something new....

Very good, though the audio quality doesn't do justice to the poem. "we're delicate, we break" excellent ending...

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