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Click hereshotgun shit storm
freeze and squeeze
please the porn factor
of pumping that shaft
for another round
bellowing your big balls
to a world grovelling
at your fucking feet
or cut it out
come with me
I'll pick you up
feed you water
and patience
all the time
you'll ever need
to speak
instead of scream
someone had to say it. Seriously now. dh is a great poet and all that, has a distinctive voice, but he certainly did not invent the hard hitting caution to the wind phrasing etc, and I bet he feels uncomfortable being given some sort of mention every time people use his name as if it is an adjective in Webster's. I know I would.
does one poet (Denis) corner the market on description? This poem written by Linbido is strong and full of attitude. Denis writes some terrific poetry, but the rest of us can use a few adjectives without being accused of copycatting. And c'mon poets--use your names. I did. :)
this one has attitude. Kicking ass then suddenly, speaking instead of screaming. Well done.