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Linbido
Linbido
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shotgun shit storm
freeze and squeeze
please the porn factor
of pumping that shaft
for another round
bellowing your big balls
to a world grovelling
at your fucking feet

or cut it out
come with me
I'll pick you up
feed you water
and patience
all the time
you'll ever need

to speak
instead of scream

 

Linbido
Linbido
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SeattleRainSeattleRainabout 20 years ago
Thank you Angeline

someone had to say it. Seriously now. dh is a great poet and all that, has a distinctive voice, but he certainly did not invent the hard hitting caution to the wind phrasing etc, and I bet he feels uncomfortable being given some sort of mention every time people use his name as if it is an adjective in Webster's. I know I would.

AngelineAngelineabout 20 years ago
Since when?

does one poet (Denis) corner the market on description? This poem written by Linbido is strong and full of attitude. Denis writes some terrific poetry, but the rest of us can use a few adjectives without being accused of copycatting. And c'mon poets--use your names. I did. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
When in

When in doubt do it like dennis! Great one lin!

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Oh yeah...

this one has attitude. Kicking ass then suddenly, speaking instead of screaming. Well done.

TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
Love it

especially the last lines.

great work

Thank you

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