we are stardust, so what?

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Liar
Liar
59 Followers

we are stardust,
so what?

she said

and erased
languid lines

laid out in the sand
before my sense

of being

complete
and always
so completely
out of sync

we are evolution,
who cares?

she purred
like a sidestep
quantum leap
mutation

flexing feline grace
fearless of time
and space

inviting

to carnal
contemplation
and clear sense
stormy stimuli

we are small
in the galaxy,
but a universe
inside of me
is still expanding
and will soon
break free

she said,
knowing
just knowing
that suns
breed and die
every second
also in me

when swirling
universes collide
logic burns
like sparkles
side by side
with galaxies
imploding

and we are stardust,
i know that now
since the moment
when she said

your universe
attracts me,
let us see
if you too
have gravity

Liar
Liar
59 Followers
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cherries_on_snowcherries_on_snowalmost 18 years ago
Gorgeous

and shimmering. Thank you. The nonplussed acceptance of the amazing was a mystery that lured me in and made me want to finish.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Nice stuff!

If we are stardust.

who cares?

The poem is exceptional

Lloyd

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
US of A

that says

more

about you

than about

this

poem

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
How...

...can anyone

who can read

enjoy

this type of

unstructured

mess?

I

can't

SBBSBBalmost 20 years ago
I love retro

that was such a wonderful poem.. very complete in the memory department.. It moved me.. and that is always a good thing!!

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