Pour Me A Fantasy

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beer me bartender
tell me tales
set me beside the ladies
keep this hand full
long neck after long neck
wash away the dust of work

kill the lights
make me a shadow
pump up the neon
make her hot pink
or long neck amber
velvet dream before my eyes

just a break...
from everday reality
just a fantasy
to travel home on
just a dream girl
for the down stroke

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Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 18 years ago
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Saw the title and wondered if the poem could equal it. That and more.

steve portersteve porterabout 20 years ago
interesting perspective...

...being a former bartender i sometimes write from that point of view...interesting to ponder another perspective...i thought this was great...thanks.

Mia MooreMia Mooreabout 20 years ago
i likeyour style

enjoyed this one very much, even though I dont drink beer ;)

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Okay... a wonderful fantasy

I loved the way you carried the beer guzzling terms through the poem, especially the long necked amber woman. The pink neon was pretty good too. good work..

jim : )

TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
No one knows

the thoughts that go through your head having a beer or two after work.

Thanks for bringing some of them out into the open.

my favorite way to ponder life.

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