Evan's confession

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Dear Evan,

it would seem
you have known all along
the nature of this crime-
spelling out the scene,
motivation exhibit A with click
clack on keyboard

emphasizing Punctuation
space
           and time

of the who dunnit
and the who exactly is
on first
    second,
       third

seems not only
you do understand,
you too spray these roses
with attention

we blush and bow
with a promise of more
verse
flower
phloem and xylem
and the inevitable pointy parts
that need no mention here

Yours in poetry,
KT

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jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Very nice...

a wonderful flow to this one. I didn't mind the wording anna mentioned, I kind of liked the repetition of "you do/you too.... Excellent poem...

jim : )

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 20 years ago
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like your letters, I think you goofed here, though, it doesn't match "seems not only

you do understand,

you too spray these roses"

"do you mean seems not only do you understand..."

I have come across this too, people pretending they are outside one world or another, when actually they are living right beside us in secret.

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