- Non-Erotic Poetry
- My Soul
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A downward spiral
quickly I do spin
my soul is empty
yet so full of sin
My outer flesh provides
merely just a shell
holding my soul hostage
in this living hell
My scars and wounds
not visible on my outer skin
belonging to my soul
which suffers from within
The torture and the torment
I have taken over time
lingering in my soul
loss of peace of mind
As I push the dagger
deep in to my chest
forcing my soul out
my body can now rest
- COMMENTS
YDDabout 20 years agoThis poem is on the dark side,
and I think your talents lie more with the light.
I hope you are on the uphill slope and continue to write.
The meter falters in this work and the words are well used.
This can happen when a poet is "down" enough not to really care.
"in to" is more commonly "into"
sandspikeabout 20 years agoI hope things pick up now that you have thrown that poor
soul out. I wish we could 'resoul' like shoes. This poem
is kinda heavy for rhyme but I still get the point.
