jungle spa

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bluerains
bluerains
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rain soaked forest
scrapes sallow skin
with moisture laden haze
honeyed in ancient musk
I bathe away
tired concrete
jungled feet
in soothing balm
of lush viridian vernal
genesis

bluerains
bluerains
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YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
jungle spa

Short lines drawing an image succinctly.

Creating picture and feeling in relief.

A balancing of light alliteration

adds to the feel of the poem.

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
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sounds wonderful and peaceful and soothing

nice work

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