- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Creature in the Pit
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Since I was young, I learned how it is done.
The low rumble growl, means feeding times now.
I've never seen it, the Creature in the Pit.
But there's no mistaking, the tummies ache'ing,
When the creature gets hungry, feed it something.
I've heard it get loud, with its deep down growl,
I often wonder what this Creature is like,
is it little or big or an aweful sight.
I carry it in me, even though it I can't see.
But I can hear it, when its hungry and throws a fit.
The rumbleing growl deep in my stomache,
from this strange, 'Creature in the Pit.'
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoClassic typos from the pen of Art. What clinches it is that reverse syntax Eve noted.
Anonymousalmost 20 years agoGood god YDD get a life and try to learn from this mans poems they are better than anything you have produced perhaps thats why you critic cause you can't write.
Art sweetie, you just keep right on writing and don't let these pencil necks bother you honey these are damn good and bring a smile to many. :)
WickedEvealmost 20 years agotypos (aweful and rumbleing) and reversed syntax (even though it I can't see) it's rather charming and would make a cute children's poem. Actually, I read it to mine. :)
