Pierced by the Beauty

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her heart's pierced with the beauty
breathless helpless, precious butterfly
she offers her life for Him to treasure
held fast for this moment of mounting
her lips burn with her Master's name

her heart was speared by his eyes,
in her surrender her soul is set free
her hunger wakened by His firm touch
impaled deep upon Him, her hips rock
circling close, moth drawn to a flame

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jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
A well focused metaphor

runs through the heart of this one, letting the image guide us as we read. Very good...

jim : )

MerrymakerMerrymakeralmost 20 years ago
Elusive butterfly...

tough to find, but priceless when attained. You've blushed this out with a light touch...nicely done.

~Merry

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailalmost 20 years ago
Precious Poem~

Very delightful and flowed well, excellent!

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
short

and beautiful

Just the right amount of words and description

nice work

Thank you

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