In A Basket

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Come distance, come dreaming, come time upon time.

Come, collect in a basket woven
with ranks of solitude sobriety,

me, and what else you need
for your wanton variety.

Come distance, collapse,
fade away,
coexist with closeness,

before we lose it
like we always fear
but never really do.

Come dreaming of pledges,
the ones I will scream
in your name, in my dream.

Come dreaming of time upon terrible time
of returning, release and reward.

Burning for this
and returning for this,
to strike on a chord

and surrender myself
once more.
Lost, now collected for you.

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Solid lines

fresh phrases and wonderful images! Thank you for this. I especially liked:

Come, collect in a basket woven

with ranks of solitude sobriety,

echoes_sechoes_salmost 20 years ago
absolutely wonderful

you painted this so well.

I loved "Lost, now collected for you."

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Both...

of your poems today are strong, much more polished than the usual first offerings from new faces. Welcome, with the sincere hope of more poetry like this from you!

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