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my heart is heavy the pain so near
my actions hurting the One i hold dear
wanting to turn back the pages of time
yearning to fix my passionate crime
knowing now to set me free
punishment, more pain is what must be
words alone cannot mend the mistake
my tear filled eyes blue as a lake
my sorrow so plain to see
what is to come will hurt not only me
knowing this deep within my soul
it's true the physical is mine to bear
but the bond between us is always there
i know in my heart when i lay there bound
taking the punishment you'll be around
not in presence, not by my side
but in my heart where it can't hide
i know when i am there with tears on my face
you will be with me in your own special place
knowing this deep within my soul
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....but try reading your poems aloud to yourself and tapping out the rythmn as you do. That way you get a feel for the beat and you'll get a smoother scan. Your rhyming is spot on tho'.
Keep writing and posting, I'll be looking for your work.