- Non-Erotic Poetry
- BusyBodies, always around
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Click hereSeminal ladies sitting
in semi-circles
sliding and scandalizing
skits slowly subsiding
scads of smiles
what a wonderful way
to wish well
for All who sat,
came through the long interlude.
Noises voices whimpers
Yes, those moans and cries,
groans and muffled grunts
a bit , she said
He gave her a gag
drool is sexy
at times
and He raised her arms
licked slowly at
the rough stubble
the taste of sheened
sweat
again and again
till she coursed ripples ,
flesh shimmering under
the kliegs and
heaving rasping breaths
slowly subsiding to a
silent hiss,
Done again and well done
By Him.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozalmost 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.
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LeBrozover 17 years agoEbb and flow of alliteration
In a rather hot piece for something not erotic.
The way this piece ends, I suspect it should be classed as erotic.
WickedEvealmost 20 years agoIt's different than your usual style. I like your usual style but I like this too--a lot.
jthserraalmost 20 years agoa wonderful use of alliteration and assonance throughout makes this one sound as good as it reads.
"Seminal ladies sitting
in semi-circles"
Damn how I wish I said that. This is a poem to read aloud and to read loudly. Very good.
jim : )
Syndra Lynnalmost 20 years agoThis is hot-
slowly subsiding to a
silent hiss,
Done again and well done
By Him.
Alliteration is ssso sssexy.
