Lecture On Gardening

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untended seeds will grow
sprawling intentions writhe
and multiply sometimes
without green fingers
ploughing the soil

and stranger flowers
unfold from unexpected buds
more beautiful than intention
with stems perhaps irregular
but stronger than ever

tend your rose garden
safe from fire and infection
but please prune with care
and self perseverance
marvel instead of meddle

and you will in parallel
grow wild with renegade roses
rising among fragrances
richer than fiction spawned
from untended seeds

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Lovely, lovely!

Earth lover's delight. Nicely done.

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
i thought it was wonderful..

when i think about your age, i'm amazed at the depth you have..

this was totally a joy to read.

xo

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Better Poems and Gardens

A well used metaphor

grown with interesting phrases,

and alliteration watered.

Good phrases such as:

"marvel instead of meddle"

"renegade roses"

annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 20 years ago
~

a neat combination of lecture and poem! I could use a lecture on gardening...

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
Wow

I really like this.

~and you will in parallel

grow wild with renegade roses

rising among fragrances

richer than fiction spawned

from untended seeds ~

That's a great finish

Nice work

Thank you

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