Putting In Time

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PUTTING IN TIME 771202

By BARUSHKO © 2004

Robin red,
wind-dripped, scary –faced, luster
after shadows

The
not-there thing; all cradled
in her disco-shook heart

The sudden warmth a bear
crushing the night

“Take me home,” they chorus,
interrupting each other;
it stops the night!

“Don’t tell me babe,” she
says on the phone

Filling these shadow
holes with clones
dulls the pain

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twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 20 years ago
Agree

Robin red may not be the best phrase to start with, but I admire this simplicity and economy of words, and the last stanza, well I agree with my betters before me.

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
the last stanza..

was my favorite. indeed!

i enjoyed this!

annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 20 years ago
putting in time, yes

"Filling these shadow

holes with clones

dulls the pain"

this part made me cry

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