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Selena_Kitt
Selena_Kitt
5,713 Followers

What combination
unseals this safe?
Go on demanding,
spinning dizzy
the dial forever.

It is flesh, after all.

Furrow into the depths, to the core
of your red and flowering center--
what bloody mess quivers there?
An open heart is required.

My polestar,
leading constellations,
is an uncertain and mercurial compass,
a dim and dull magnetic field.

There is no longer that pull--
only this hunger
for thick honey
turning black, congested,
but sweet, like marrow,
hardening smooth as melted glass.

There is only a narrow way through.

Selena_Kitt
Selena_Kitt
5,713 Followers
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flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Very nice

Loved the metaphors regarding navigation. I don't fully understand the last stanza, but the final line is wonderful.

jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
You know your craft!

I loved the line "this hunger for thick honey turning black". Though tempted, I know better than to be a thief! (LOL) I intend to watch for your name.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnover 19 years ago
oh yes!

this is a great poem. wonderful metaphors and vivid images. nice work!

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
Some great

images.

Nice work

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22over 19 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

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