Hopeless romanticism on a train

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Liar
Liar
59 Followers

Sigh
don't sit there
    pastel patched
    blue jeansed
    mint green sheer slipped
    babydoll pink snug dressed
    bare deep gold chained decolletage
    tastefully temptative
    pretty as a postcard
but workday weary

Sigh
don't look so
jaded gaze neutral
flawless observer
    out the familiar
    slideshow landscape
    same as always once again
    rushing for it

Don't feel so
    thinned out
    locked in
    put down
    messed up
and don't sigh

don't sigh like that

Sigh
don't just sit there
come unlock that frown
next to me
for a moment
    that can last
    for the travel time of neurons
    palm to mind
    or for a minor eternity
if we face this
hand in hand

Liar
Liar
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dcpoet44dcpoet44over 19 years ago
excellent rhythm....

and rolls down the track in a wonderful tone with great imagery. nicely done liar.

The_FoolThe_Foolover 19 years ago
Good Beat

and you can dance to it. Holding hands, dancing, etc. :) I could see a hundred different sequels, which is why you should never write one... Good job Liar.

jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
"palm to mind...

for a minor eternity"

Bravo!

BlueskyBeautyBlueskyBeautyover 19 years ago
awww

very touching..indeed romantic.

enjoyed this!

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
good stuff

Some poems you can just feel--like this one.

*No longer using the thermometer.

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