- Non-Erotic Poetry
- haiku: big dipper
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kids running ahead
flashlights aimed at the night sky --
big dipper!
- COMMENTS
LeBrozalmost 16 years agoThis poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 40,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>
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KOLKOREover 16 years agoI could not know if this poet imagined the ambiguity which I found in this poem. While the flash lights may be pointing to the stars installation in the sky, a mirroring 'constellation' of dotted lights might have occurred to the observing poet right here upon earth as the connecting image of all those lights emanating from the kids' flash lights...
