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Click hereVoices cry out
in passion, guttural moans
just barely human
I break my rhythym-
barely noticeable to
you, open my eyes
just to see your face,
awkwardly ecstatic and
unaware of me
looking at you with
hunger, wanting to record
a moment soon gone-
Breaks from cliche by capturing a real moment. In this poem you have stepped away from the more predictable path of your other new offering. Well done, bourbonslut.
The last lines: "wanting to record a moment soon gone-" are really the most interesting. I like the way you wrapped this one up.