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Voices cry out
in passion, guttural moans
just barely human

I break my rhythym-
barely noticeable to
you, open my eyes

just to see your face,
awkwardly ecstatic and
unaware of me

looking at you with
hunger, wanting to record
a moment soon gone-

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flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
feels real

Breaks from cliche by capturing a real moment. In this poem you have stepped away from the more predictable path of your other new offering. Well done, bourbonslut.

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
good poem

The last lines: "wanting to record a moment soon gone-" are really the most interesting. I like the way you wrapped this one up.

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