Two hours

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Two hours
that's all

the distance between us
but just as well
any closer
I would be in you

that's how large
my lust is for you

Two hours
so far

the minutes so many
one hundred and twenty
60 second
eternities

to a man
in love

Two hours
away

not long
before I find
this time alone
has changed

to ours
together

two
ours

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Du LacDu Lacover 19 years ago
Loved the use ...

great poem and wonder work on the short and long building of the stanzas.. falling back and forth longing and patience.. good stuff

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
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Very nice work tt2u. This metaphor is something I know myself and your poem flows seamlessly. Fab!

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailover 19 years ago
witty tung~

love the twist and focus on the time broken down cute~

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Very nice

I think I already commented on the boards, tt2u; I love the clever word play and tick tock clock of your lust. Well done!

impressiveimpressiveover 19 years ago
The desire ...

... is palpable! ~Imp

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