silver slut

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silvery slut

wide open

cup
runneth over

waste laced
on the corner

newspaper flies
        from
wind and aroma

metalica coma

trashy basket case

sunglasses bottle o booze

yesterday's meal ticket

waiting waiting waiting

to be picked up!

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templemindedtemplemindedover 19 years ago
ok

thinkok says it all.....as i've always said...only you :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Mind tripper

I haven't a clue to what you're talking about, but I do like the string-a-long of words you have here. Very tricky and makes you think. Nice, very nice.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 19 years ago
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Whoa, gotta love it

"waste laced"

easily the best two words, I've seen slapped together in a while

Du LacDu Lacover 19 years ago
fly fishing....

Loved the way you broke up the rhetoric.. jaggy... back forth, uncomfortable but comfortable that sense of the struggle the lure.. fly fishing in the wind..although some how I did not get the punch Art with the last line.. ???? don't know it did not hold the zest... of the rest... maybe just me.. but the rest YES! Loved it

Du Lac

AnnoraAnnoraover 19 years ago
Another facet

Good writing Art.

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