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bluerains
bluerains
15 Followers

Rivulets of rich moist kisses
pasted against soft sensous shoulders,
aromatic vanilla wispy hair
crosses paths with hungry lips
trailing down exposed breasts.
Hands desperately grasp leather buckles
as suddenly too tight denims beg freedom.
Bodies drenched in hot smoldering vapor
inhale its aphrodisia breath.
The room spins as temperature rises,
light reflects its prism, creating passion.
Pinnacle points of energy erupt coiled
serpentine current in exertion of their chi.
Skin glistens and binds the connection;
hard and soft bond in celestial sacrament.
Tranquility draws the blinds of mating
in the silence of nuptial embrace.

bluerains
bluerains
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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Drip

I like eroticism that drips. In this write the eroticism did more than drip, it washed off the page and got all over me. I think it needed all the words you used to do this.

I really loved

'as suddenly too tight denims beg freedom'

that line is so perfect.

Trent_DutchTrent_Dutchabout 19 years ago
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Your Poem has been mentioned on the New Poems Reviews for Tuesday 1st of February.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 19 years ago
hard and soft bond in celestial sacrament

Great line! Over all I like this poem, but it's wordy. Tighten it up by losing the excess, and it drips eroticism.

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