- Non-Erotic Poetry
- stillwater [modern tanka]
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Click here early morning sun
shines sky shapes upon anglers
glassy inlet sea
flatboat rides upside down as
blurred clouds collide with sea gulls
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 19 years agoI really loved this.. flatboat upside down... twists the mind of the reader... serene reading then FLIP.. thank you for introducing this form... now I want to learn more.. love it as usual your writing inspires
Du Lac~
Liarabout 19 years agoBut this very precise, and still inventive kind of descriptive poetry feels very...well...japanese. Beautifully painted. Especially the last line.
sandspikeabout 19 years agoIf I was going to tanka a toy I would of gone with this
subject matter. I don't know that I could of pulled it off
this well. 'flatboat rides upside down' is that a reflection I'm seeing? I've been at this inlet many times.
