Quiet Wind

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bluerains
bluerains
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 We, shake in silence
 as weakened hearts pray
 for the gift of prolonged life.
 We, sit isolated in fear
 of the worst predictions.
We, become paralized
partners on the sidelines
hoping for the promise
of another tomorrow.

So we hold on to our faith
and let go of our fear
and silence becomes
our serenity...

bluerains
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Yes!

Good. Very good.

~Syn

Maria2394Maria2394about 19 years ago
:)

silence and serenity. like a room filled with the bursting hum of a thousand smiles. nice work blue, enjoyed :)

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
A great reflection...

upon life, and finding peace and acceptance within what it offers us.

dcpoet44dcpoet44about 19 years ago
calmness....

prevails through these words. you left a very nice quiet wind. nice work!!...don

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenabout 19 years ago
Such a tranquil...

and soothing effect this winds down with in the last stanza, blue. Makes you wonder if the way to handle life's uncontrollable surprises is with meditation. This poem just convinced Me of that. Very nice job!

Vixxx

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