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Click hereraven lives
on bordered
moonlight edges
watching his world
disappear
in houses of sand
and mortar
waiting for
restless ocean to
crack the dead
stones
and claim
the gathered dust
recently I attended a gathering and was inspired by
[A prophecy of Andrew bigsmoke ..a cree Native...]
It is brief, yet, it evokes a powerful scene of strength and determination.
I like the visual of A raven waiting? Although some tribes consider the raven to be a wicked creature, ocean of dust and dead rocks? You got close to the peyote cactus didn't you <grin>
This is my favorite of the day, but I wish it had a little stronger title.
I very much enjoyed reading this. It is simple, yet expresses a kind of faith beautifully.