- Illustrated Poetry
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A first attempt at both an illustrated poem, and a triolet.
- COMMENTS
Campus779 months agoYou have a good touch. I can understand why you aren't writing more poetry. Me neither :-(
Amyfriendabout 17 years agowith a very appropriate picture that makes it even stronger
duddle146over 17 years agoDeep, powerful and heartfelt. The triolet only made the lines stronger. The dark background helped convey the meaning.
Wanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years agothis was better than best, Alex. Your combination of basic black shadow imagery backgrounding the simplistic; yet eloquent style of the triolet set the mood for a beautiful flow of verse. This was just lovely!
Vixxx
