- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Shattered
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Click herea moment's joy, shared visions
then a sudden
"Oh!"
and the dull thump of your body collapsing
frantic pounding of nine-one-one
shrill sirens pierce the air
their undulating cries
carve slices from my heart
frenzied medics
work their magic to no avail
the look of surprise is still on your face
as they wheel your shell away
lives shattered in an instant
vacuum engulfs me
still
cold
silent
shock, pain and anger
weave a tapestry of agony and loss
through my soul
how?
why?
the circle turned
so abruptly
no time to plan, to share
to say I love you
one more time
I wake
shrouded in cold, sweaty sheets
calling your name
can you hear me?
- COMMENTS
dcpoet44almost 19 years agoall the way straight through the core of my soul......nicely done.....don
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoI could feel the pain in your heart from this piece. It had as much hurt as the first poem had light and fun in it.
*hugs*
Bridget69almost 19 years agoA sobering poem about the fragility of life and the unpredictability of death.
My Erotic Talealmost 19 years agoor twilight poem zone <grin>
very gripping and interesting, clever
and mystical. I enjoyed the read, thanks
