Watergirl

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bluerains
bluerains
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Beneath a pale unicorn moon
unfurled by its thirteenth hour
sanguine siren pauses,
bejeweled and naked languishing
in water peaks cresting against her
seraphic golden limbs.

Neptune flows between honeyed thighs
as midnight tides rise around
timeless hourglass of symmetrical perfection.

Slivers of magnetic moon beams
cast shadows over aqueous cleavage as
casanova wolf howls rage in briny ripples.

Nature begs embrace in sea swells
as thermal currents cull the fiery brand
into fathoms of her abyssal chamber.

Hungry voracious thirst,
in ecliptic eddies orbit
the carnal undertow;
vermilion titan unshackles
her phoenix.

bluerains
bluerains
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6 Comments
sacksackover 18 years ago
simply beautiful.....

I thought the best line was "timeless hourglass of symmetrical perfection", but they were all darn good!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
sci fi poetry <grin>

that was a wild word ride. A spiral descent of literature like a water fall, it loudly splashed, I just can't grasp it. <grin> ^5 (O_O)

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
Nice flow...

of mythical images.

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
nice title.......

and all that follows is nice imagery. agree with tess on selected lines.......nice job.......don

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
*****

Vivid images described with well chosen words.

"vermilion titan unshackles

her phoenix. " indeed!

Tess

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