My Desire

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~hellbaby~
~hellbaby~
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I want to be held tightly throughout the night
And sleep to the rhythmic rise and fall of his chest
His warm tender breath
Dewey as it caresses my neck
I want know man’s desire against my lower back
And listen to his gentle moans
When I push against his growing sex
Reaffirming our mutual need for physical intimacy

I long for the day when limbs entwine,
And senses heighten
Causing juices to flow with anticipation
As fingertips dance on burning flesh
Until our bodies scream at each other
Breaking the silence without a sound

~hellbaby~
~hellbaby~
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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
Ahhhhhh yes

Lovingly and sensuously erotic

great imagery

sacksackalmost 19 years ago
I like the last two lines especially....

I think "Dewey" is actually a name, were you thinking of "dewy"? The only other part I might change is "man's desire"...how about "his desire" to make it more individual and personal?

BelegonBelegonalmost 19 years ago
I like how...

...you speak of the growing desire and the anticipation, and focus on the buildup. It is all too tempting to leave those times unspoken, yet they are often more intense then they're release.

ShamanskissShamanskissalmost 19 years ago
Enjoyed it a lot

reminded me of some personal memories

of the more wholesome kind,

where love found erotic and coexisted,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I agree

This is hotly erotic without the all-too frequent "nasties". Thank you.

Tess

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