Daughter

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She has reached that age where she knows it all.
Tells me day in, day out, this is how it should be.
 Please remember I am a big girl now.
 
I can do anything.

What happened to the girl I once knew.
She was a sight to behold ... even then.
I have just learned, that love changes.
transforms...

As she has changed, so much...

Long beautiful golden hair, cut.
Chopped to the ground, weightlessness
at its best. A teenage pixie has replaced,
the uneven edges of a lil the girl
I once knew.

Boys are hot, lil brothers are brats.
Can I have more money for this?
No, I do NOT want that. Take me here.
I am gonna go there.

No Mom, I will do as I like.

I'm sorry Mom, for being so disrespectful.
*Screaming* across the room she glides.
I'm sorry your sick, how can I help?
Oh the heart, she leads it so well.

Lil finger crooked to Mom,
with prideful, gapped tooth grin,
so you wanna be my frienn...

A daughter to be proud of.
Brilliant... too damn smart.

Reading...
She writes, (grins)
What will she do next...

Beautiful smile, reminds me of my Mom.

Sparkling eyes of mischief
Yes, she has my number, sure enough.
I do all I can. Love her with all my soul.
Knowing...
She is the daughter of my heart...

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devilnangel2devilnangel2over 17 years ago
Oh the joys of daughters

So beautiful and well-spoken. Each instant is an expectation of mine being a mom of a 7 yr old going on

21.

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 18 years ago
Love is a Powerful Thing

And the love of a child is the most powerful force in all of creation.

ty,bd

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
Love 'em or Strangle 'em

Ah yes - remember it well

she's 14 going on 20

and wanting to date the 19 year old down the street;

no matter your stand, you're wrong

and damned up one side & down the other.

bigntenderbigntenderover 18 years ago
Look out!

She's morphing into that state in between childhood and adulthood, when they are non-human. Great description. Hang on tight. It's gonna be a rough ride.

Jennifer CJennifer Cover 18 years ago
Lovely piece

That was beautiful RF,

You pride for your child

shines through in your

writing. I have a little

boy and I know there is no

such love as the love for

your child.

Just lovely, thank you

for sharing,

~ Jenn

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