Voices In The Night

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Light fog shrouds lofty tops of Douglas Firs,
a gauzy moon casts its muted, silvery glow
over a simple campsite.
Towering hulks of giant trees
cast sleepy translucent shadows
over the primordial forest floor.

Orange-red embers dance to a breeze
no human could possibly feel
as the dinner fire slows to dormancy.
Gazing into the glow of your eyes,
I hear only nature’s voices in the night,
feel only love in this perfect moment.

Your hand tenderly reaches over to mine,
energizing parallel heartbeats
at that first moment of touch.
Holding you close, we are the observers,
night creatures rule Lothlorien
while our silence protects the peace.

Silently slipping into light bedding
our bodies gently explore each other,
the ancient forest ever vigilant.
Sated, as one, we pass into dream-time,
leaving the nocturnal world to itself,
hearing only eternal voices in the night.

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Nice, Very nice~

Warm, sizzling lil poem here.

One wants to snuggle up in this and go to sleep.

Vivid imagery.

Your words brings it home,

with a dash of pepper thrown in...

Hot lil read~

Snuck up on me. *grins*

Jennifer CJennifer Cover 18 years ago
Lovely writing

Great visuals, I could really

picture that forest and the

roaring campfire. Lovely

writing very well done!

Thanks.

~ Jenn

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
cozy

fire...warm blanket .. a perfect mixture of bliss...in a soft quiet style...nice..blue