racing engines

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bluerains
bluerains
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cobalt frame
attracts
souped up shades
in hypnotic hues
pulling metal
from cords
of blue...

ligatures down
driving need
shifts ...
hearts speed
like jaguars

rims to road
recklessness propels
moist motion
delving deep
fast and furious
stroking stick
shift to petal
while motors
rock in rhythm

quickness
lingers long
enough
to charge
the engines

bluerains
bluerains
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6 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
mentioned

...in the new poems review thread.

Tess

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
in all cylinders......

with the beauty that purrs in the finish......great piece blue........don

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
the sound alone...

fuels the soul.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
hypnotic?

I'd think about the word 'hypnotic'. To me it's the only word in the poem that doesn't work. I'd go further and say it spoils a great poem for me.

Good poem though.

b'brig

Jennifer CJennifer Cover 18 years ago
Fast and furious!

Loved this fast paced

action packed poem!

Great read blue,

thanks.

~ Jenn

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