00' A Tear

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A tear rolls down.
Slipping away
In the silence
Of night.
The clouds of darkness
Turning to storm.
Crashing at once
Breaking down the strong.
Broken and singed
The storm taking it's toll.
Laid out in a crowd.
Dead though breathing.
Noticed but not seen.
The tears of rain
Never to be seen.
Silently slipping,
Slipping away.
In the dark of night.

-- Jessi --
- 5/24/00 -

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
TEARS IN THE STORM

leaves the sky untold. TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Lovely!

The sadness and forlorn of crying silently and alone. Exquisitely Written. Poignant and beautiful in it's simple beauty.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Tears slide away

In weather that's appropriate ~

Some can be mild storms of joy

While others, tumultuous affairs of great pain...

Jennifer CJennifer Cover 18 years ago
nice

I love how you use

emotions so well.

Thanks.

~ Jenn