- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Cherry Lemonade Picnic for Two
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(pantoum-ish)
We gave ourselves what life never granted
a cherry lemonade picnic for two
On thrones of sand we sat so enchanted
king and queen of a world no one else knew
When all we had was stripped away
we gave ourselves what life never granted
Even without a means to pay
on thrones of sand we sat enchanted
It was our love that pulled us through
when all we had was stripped away
We did whatever we wanted to
even without the means to pay
Whenever the road we took was rough
it was our love that pulled us through
Even when things got really tough
we did whatever we wanted to
We always helped each other along
whenever the road we took was rough
The bond we shared was deep and strong
even when things got really tough
The times when we did not agree
We always helped each other along
Anyone with eyes could clearly see
the bond we shared was deep and strong
We always helped each other along
On thrones of sand we sat enchanted
the bond we shared was deep and strong
We gave ourselves what life never granted
- COMMENTS
CaPic267almost 17 years agoJust love the way this sounds! It seems like two people so much in love with all the world before them. CP
EmJ0385almost 17 years agoThat title grabbed me and I just had to read. Love it!! Emily
LeBrozabout 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.
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Anonymousover 18 years agoread anything of yours in the past ..it was the name I guess...made me think of that crappie movie hellboy...ugh...but...when you commented on dark waters ...I cheked out your site. and found you most delightful...thanks for showing me that a name is not always as it seems...smiles/blue
LeBrozover 18 years ago~hellbaby~ with apologies, but I can't help myself:
An evocative piece so inspiring,
of a couple too in love to be tiring;
so despite all of life's travails,
with their love they find they prevail.
