Anninaki

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bluerains
bluerains
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lovegod elixir
poses for eclectic negatives
Consciousness splits

love is venomous
love in flexibility
returning the bite


shadow collapses
maestro plays upon green fields
swallowed by its draft

lost leviathan cruises
across eroded seascape with
elements of blood bled

symmetry disarms dragon myth
as love depicts elements lost by control

bluerains
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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
I love the...

images you create in this fine piece... Does "Anninaki"..have any relationship to Annunaki?

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
lovely

Each stanza of this rendering spirits the reader away into images that caress the mind.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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Very nicely done. Loved this line 'as love depicts elements lost by control'

TY,BD

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Thought Provoking ~

Wow ... what a spinner.

I love the imagery here.

This one took me to another world.

Love changes everything it touches my friend.

Good ... Bad .. to love we are all ... One.

More Please ~

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
it reads like a gentle rain...

smooth and easy . I just have a problem

with the reality of it. Maybe if the title was 'Anninaki

for dumb asses 101'. Yell me up if you return to earth,

where the waves kiss the evening sunset. sand

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