- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Blue Revelations I
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Click hereBlue Revelations verse 1
touching your darkness
you avert my stare
I unfold obscene
thoughts in your mind
yet, you blink and bind...
you want me to show you
how to break the frame
of your indigo glass
as your clenched body
stumbles in murky gaze
would you be astonished
to feel lanced wounds
of knowing cut flowers never bloom
Do you want me to say I’m
sorry for breaking the
crystal madness
hiding your looking glass tomb
and could we both lament
unsheathing the sword...
draining its ravin
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- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 17 years agoOf the two nonerotic revelation pieces,
This has a harder, darker feel
That even my Double Fudge Chocolate pudding cannot soften.
LeBrozover 17 years agoOf the two nonerotic revelation pieces,
This has a harder, darker feel
That even my Double Fudge Chocolate pudding cannot soften.
My Erotic Taleover 18 years agonice wording and alluring write, sprinkled with the haze of blue poetry
sweet GA peachesover 18 years ago"would you be astonished
to feel lanced wounds
of knowing cut flowers never bloom".... could any verse be as bitter sweet as this, my my my , ... what a thought this leaves,... in awe... sweetGApeaches...
