Inside Me

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So surely he must know
the slightest touch
of his lips
glazing softly across
the red cherry horizon
sweet drips of honey
like morning dews desire
seen glistening through
as a raspberry dream
outlined with a dark
crimson mark
center my heart.

So intensly he must know
the slightest touch
of his flesh
like a bruise to my skin
yet wanting to sink
deeper in
tantalizing .. revitalizing
makes me feel alive
this passionate side
aching purely
from within.

So effortlessly he must know
as the softer side
begins to show
and unveil truths
meant for only
he to see
drops of passion
deliciously
unforbidden
the fruit of all sin
so surely
he must know,

I am
letting
him in.

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DuPainDuPainabout 16 years ago
*Soft*

A hard man falls far for the soft heart, you have surrounded us with your words Peaches and overwhelmed us with your gentle spirit!

I think we like you love!!

Wiliam

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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In telling about him inside you, you bring us inside you. Very nice.

ty,bd

quietpoetquietpoetover 18 years ago
Very nice

You pulled me in with this one. Very sensual write! It is nice to untie the sash a bit, try to look like you are relaxing with the heart pounding, wondering...hoping...

Keep it up!

John... oops qp

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
aahh peaches

you have a soft touch with the pen..luring one into your wonder...luv you verse here...so rhythmic....like drifting in a tire on the gentle waves of of the sea..in fantasy...nice pen ...bluerains

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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So effortlessly, so smoothly

pulling us in

a good read.

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