- Erotic Poetry
- Yours
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I cradled every thought
of his sins,
and lips,
on the tip
of my tongue.
We were young
and wild,
You were free,
and I
was make-believe.
For a moment, yours.
We took the moon for a ride,
as you eased inside,
for a stars wink,
to wear my flesh of fantasy.
You kissed me
deep,
and long,
and for moments strong,
you had me.
Down to the salty sweet pit
of my youth,
and the flaming truths
unveiling need and lust and desire,
we were fire, as
we clawed at the walls that
that lay spent with lust,
as the sun swallowed the moon,
and the night turned to dust.
It was hours long,
and I was gone.
We were young,
and wild,
you were free..
you thought you had me,
And I was make - believe,
For a moment, yours.
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREabout 16 years agoSo nice to find such an erotic poem with a breathtaking beauty of imagery. For once I could agree with the "mad grener"...
LeBrozover 16 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.
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RhymeFairyover 18 years agoSweet Ga this one is slow n Dreammmmyy ~~~
I love the imagery, very good phrasing and I the buildup
is great.
Keep'm coming, we grow as we write, and YOUR writng
* speaks * to the reader. Honored to be here with ya ~!!
* Yellow Roses * for the E,
and Hugs to hang'in there. * Smiles *
I love it !!
Bill Dadaover 18 years agoHey, congratulations on the E, it was well deserved. I was sitting here trying to think of something cliched and boring (I don't know about you, but I work very hard at being both boring and cliched) and you will never guess what I came up with. Give up? It could be nothing else but anonymous rude comments.
