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Click herethe monkey trap
a simple bottle
with a shiney shiney stone
the wanting hand grabs
but now the holding hand
cannot escape the bottle
stubborn foolish monkey
is trapped there
held helpless for as long as it takes
till the man with the yellow hat
to come and take me away
undone by desire
remember children
at the end of the movie
it was beauty that killed the beast
...George rides again. Look but don't touch? I like your thinking.
Tess
did you switch "person" in your poem? It started out fine, then went from " the monkey" to take "me away". I think that should be made clear in your work, if it is a generic, anon monkey of if it is you all along......I like your idea, you have a good start but the change up confused me along with the end,. What does beauty and the beast have to do with your monkey? just curious....
keep writing!!