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Down they fall like diamonds from the sky,
Glittering in the winter moonlit night,
Each one different and unique.
Together they cover the ground,
Blanketing the hard, cold Earth.
Pristine, white and pure,
Like the innocence of a child's first kiss.
Snow covers the branches of the trees,
Bringing beauty to what some view as dead,
Making it appear new and bright under its veil.
Winter brings abou a time for nature to sleep,
To rest its weary head for the spring to come.
- COMMENTS
emaalrover 16 years agowho may never have had the pleasure of snow and or the beauty of it...
nice write
cherries_on_snowalmost 18 years agoAs a northerner, I can truly appreciate the beauty of snow, (well until the third month of it anyway). =D I really like that you get that feeling across of the way the snow adds life to the winter landscape. My only issue with the poem were technical errors. The "what some see as dead" goes from branches to an it in the same stanza, and a minor typo (missing a t). Some tightening would make this worthy for rough seas. Otherwise, beautifully done in terms of your balanced stanzas and imagery.
Anonymousover 18 years agoI love the images that you've painted in your poem. Very festive and cute!
